I am not dead! I am busy, very wretchedly busy, but not yet dead.
Among the many irons I have jammed in the fire, I have lately been working on a retelling of the Snow Queen. I thought it was a novella, but we have made 11K without getting Gerta more than a few days down the road, so I may be wrong. We'll find out, I suppose.
This is a hard story to work with, mostly because after about ten minutes, I want to drop-kick Kay into the sun. He's about as sympathetic as dirt. Theoretically we should feel sorry for him because...uh...he's a kid who had something bad happen to him that wasn't his fault, I guess, except I kinda ditched the magic mirror bit as unworkably weird, so basically Kay is now a totally normal self-centered obnoxious angsty teenage boy, and I have no patience with him whatsoever and as far as I am concerned, the Snow Queen can have him and good riddance.
(In my own defense, Hans Christian Anderson did NOT give his much later retellers a lot to go on. Kay does nothing in the entire story except get kissed and be a jerk.)
God help me, Kay is basically a somewhat malicious McGuffin. You could change the whole story so that Gerta is trying to get back a rug that ties the room together and it would make just as much sense and also you probably wouldn't want to punch the rug.
Obviously I am shipping the hell outta Gerta and the robber girl, but I am running into the problem where Kay is so profoundly worthless that I am starting to get impatient with Gerta for going after him in the first place. And while I am very sympathetic to "loyal and broken" as a character type, the whole story sort of hinges on them both being so damn young, and I am old and grumpy and sort of just want Gerta to stay home.
(Also, hoo boy, but this is a weird one. "Oh, yeah, your buddy the raven? Dropped dead off-screen, very sad." "I'm outta paper, let me write this note on a fish. LIKE YOU DO." I am having fun with some of it, like the plant dreams, but kind of worried that no one who isn't familiar with the source material will find this story even remotely readable...)
I haven't actually read much of S. with Falstaff, but wasn't that much of both his reason-de-enter, and his great popular appeal?
Cherryh went in for "(possibly) loyal and (derf'luy) broken" male characters and got that extremely old in its very many renditions...
Her early novels, the Morgaine Triology (which if you have NEVER read, !!) the male co-protagonist was just capable but beaten down, and that was as good as it got in many of her novels. Others were more balanced.
"Kejthåndet" is left-handed, in Danish; kaj is a jackdaw. FYI. Maybe Kay is only a piece of herself that Gerda needs to find be complete, to accept: an imaginary part of herself (the mirror, again).
There may be some people in this world who don't know that "Frozen" started off as "The Snow Queen" but then the writers decided they didn't want Elsa to be a villain.
My favorite retelling of "The Snow Queen" is by Joan D. Vinge. I love it when a writer takes a fantasy story and turns it into a science fiction story. Of course that reminds me of "There and Back Again" by Pat Murphy. Where she did a gender flipped version of "The Hobbit" in space.
Depends on how you're working it, though, of course.
Ultimately most people in english speaking/reading countries are likely to have at least a passing familiarity with the source material, that particular variation has been disneyfied enough that its an essential childhood story.
Not often told in the original, sadly, a bit more reality in those stories would be a good thing for some children I think.
Did you ever read The Wilde Girl by Kate Forsyth - a retelling of where some of the stories the Grimm brothers originally sourced. Its not a ..... happy story, it must be said
http://www.kateforsyth.com.au/wild_girl
It occurred to me a few years back that wait, Alex would do a lot better as an Alexandra (although she goes by Lex), and my rather stereotypical boring paint by numbers romantic interest turned into a kickass proud-as-hells-of-it dyke with an attitude and a half.
I don't know how closely you're trying to fit to the original tale, but this is the sort of thing I like to think about, myself. (I say, writing a very creepy lesbian Snow White where the Evil Queen believes Snow is the reincarnation of her lost lover... and Snow escapes during her debut and encounters the huntsman who has heard of the girl trapped in the Queen's castle and sweeps her off to the dwarves, who are actually mixed gendered, and Snow ends up falling in love with a lady dwarf. Because fuck no, I'm not doing the Evil Lesbian thing. It bears no real resemblance to the original tale but it's hella fun to write.)
It would be nice if Gerta had some sensible reason, like she co-signed a morgage with him, or got pregnant and needs his ass for child support. Or at least wanted to go down in history as a first person getting to the north pole under her own steam and, ok, get Kay out while she is at that.
And absolutely, Gerta-robber girl ship is the best thing ever.
Not dead is good - and good luck and skill with the writing.
Unjerking Kay
Who cares how it used to be told? Maybe that was just a first draft. you're telling it now, so tell it how you like best. That was a pretty winning combination in Toad Words and Other Stories.
Gerta/Robber OTP FTW!
Re: Unjerking Kay
(That's how I always interpreted it. He may be a jerk, but he's still a PERSON and you don't steal PERSONS, right? Actually looking at it that way I see a lot of parallels to the Wee Free Men...)
;)
My interpretation is Kay is self-absorbed and self-centered and focused on his Ahhhhrt and takes Gerta for granted as a sort of non-attached appendage that takes care of the things he doesn't have a smidgen of interest in doing (cooking, cleaning, clothing, caring, other important life things that start with c...).
Gerta is equally young and immature and her ONE TWUE LOVE is Kay. She is very dependent on him and only longs to make him happy, her life has no meaning without him, she has no goals that don't involve him, yadda yadda teenage-obsessive-love-fantasy. Of course this makes beginning-Gerta fairly equally annoying and non-sympathetic but She Gets Better!
Separate the two of them and you eventually end up with a Kay who (despite having all his physical needs met) realises there are such things as emotions and maybe they aren't so useless and weak and gee wouldn't it be nice if I had someone to care about me but oops--he abandoned the only one who ever did without a second thought. His bad. ETA: A nice way to get Kay some character growth might be by showing him pictures of Gerta coming to rescue him. HE has no idea she is attempting rescue and sees her being all awesome without him with her awesome independent self and her awesome relationships with people (*cough*RobberGirl*cough*) who don't treat her like a doormat (all without needing his oh-so-important-center-of-the-world self around!).
Then you get a Gerta who realises she can be independent and she does have a personality other than a door-mat and hey maybe she deserves to be treated better but she's halfway round the world and she does love him (she thinks, mostly) and plus she can't leave anyone to a Monster... but she'll definitely kick his butt to the curb post-rescue if he doesn't pull his head out of it first.
And so luckily for Kay and Gerta's future non-adolescent selves they both mature and grow-up as a result of Ze-Snow-Queen and become people with an actual balanced relationship that has more of a chance of a snowball in hell.
Mercedes Lackey does a decent job with it in her romance imprint stuff (it's actually called _The Snow Queen_). Of course being a mainstream romance imprint it's heterosexual relationships all around and is annoying (not to mention despite fixing up K/G the other 'main' romances are crap and the main romantic lead dude is a jerk*). The SQ is her protag and the Kay/Gerta stuff gets regulated to a side-story while the SQ deals with an imposter/big bad. I found the twisting of the original to be the most interesting part of the entire book though.
*Maybe The Snow Queen just requires a certain amount of male jerk-itude?
Also, go Gerta/Robber-Girl!
Edited at 2014-09-26 01:12 am (UTC)
(It does kind of cheat, though, by only giving us one actual chapter of the serial and leaving us to imagine the rest for ourselves.)