My edits for Dragonbreath 2 are back (working title--and ONLY the working title--"Ninjabreath.")
They're not bad. Mostly minor--changing a sequence or two, adding a bit here and there, making more full comic panels, nothing in the "By the way, re-write the whole book!" vein that I think most authors are secretly fearing.
And, in other news, hermit thrush in the front yard! (It has to be a hermit-thrush, since they're the only ones who overwinter in North America.) It's sort of ironic...as soon as I complain about the lack of species, I get thrushes, brown creepers, savannah sparrows. That'll teach me...
They're not bad. Mostly minor--changing a sequence or two, adding a bit here and there, making more full comic panels, nothing in the "By the way, re-write the whole book!" vein that I think most authors are secretly fearing.
And, in other news, hermit thrush in the front yard! (It has to be a hermit-thrush, since they're the only ones who overwinter in North America.) It's sort of ironic...as soon as I complain about the lack of species, I get thrushes, brown creepers, savannah sparrows. That'll teach me...